Dear Journal,
In the third chapter of the Novel '' The Call Of The Wild '' Buck and the team of dogs are traveling pulling the sleigh. During this Travel Buck fights alot with Spitz the leader of the team, which at the end of the chapter, Buck breaks Spitz Left fore leg and Spitz can't do anything no more. Will Buck become the leader in the next Chapters ? Some questions i'm wondering is what else will be found on Buck's way ? I realte this One Question that I awnsered by reading this chapter is that the beating is still continuing. I relate this chapter of the Novel to a life experienced that happend to me when I was boarding my neighbor's Dogs at my house for 2 weeks. One of the dogs was always pushing the other one away because he was showing that he was dominant and one day the second dog that was always pushed around decided to fight back and pounced on the dominant dog's neck and they fought for 5 minutes. The domnant Dog's front leg was pierced side to side and blood was pissing out of their. I needed to sperate the Dog's paddock in to two so that they had not contact anymore.
Good journal Alex like, but like a lot of people do is they make it to much like a summary like you did. just watch out about that its the only mistake other than that its great, the grammer is good. But you would want to structure it more a bit but paragraphs or something. Keep it up Alex !
ReplyDeleteGreat Journal Alex. I like the relation that you made with a personal life experince and your book. The only suggestion i would make is like Alex. D said not to summarize too much.
ReplyDeleteGood Journal Alex I have to agree with justin I like the way you related to your life experiance. You make your book sound interesting.
ReplyDeleteHey Alex, great journal entry. It's great that you related your life experience to one of the chapters. The only thing that bothers me is your spelling mistakes. Maybe ask someone to edit your work beforehand, but other than that, it's great.
ReplyDeleteIt is a pretty good journal but you should try and answer the questions you are asking. It's good how you use personal life experiences to connect to it though. Good job.
ReplyDeletei agree with alex D your grammar is really good and how you related to your own experiences was great keep it up and its going to be great :)
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